pyc-website

commit 3bfc0580f0c212d53100cb51c38da47f0461bfad
parent 3140d7ecbffaee44513431acd89573b852fbda7f
Author: Jul <jul@9o.is>
Date:   Mon, 14 Jul 2014 21:02:56 -0400

edit about.html

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diff --git a/src/main/webapp/about.html b/src/main/webapp/about.html
@@ -3,13 +3,13 @@
 	<div class="row margin-top-10">
 		<div class="col-xs-12 multi-column">
 			<p>
-			PYC is an innovative, C-Type corporation on the forefront of the cryptocurrency: 
-			Bitcoin. Our company, along with our business associates, provide the convenient 
+			PYC is an innovative corporation on the forefront of the software-based payment system: 
+			Bitcoin. Our company provides the convenient 
 			distribution of Bitcoin in an environment and manner that is safe and compliant 
 			for both legal and legitimate applications. We are dedicated to helping our 
 			customers not only increase their personal wealth, but secure it by utilizing our 
 			unique Bitcoin services. PYC aspires to not only provide a state of the art service 
-			in which helps circulate and establish reputable value in Bitcoin, but to help the 
+			that helps circulate and establish reputable value in Bitcoin, but to help the 
 			everyday man or woman achieve more economically than he or she ever thought possible.
 			</p>
 		</div>
@@ -26,8 +26,8 @@
 		<div class="col-xs-12 multi-column">
 				<p>
 					PYC was founded by Emilio Pagan-Yourno of Schenectady, NY and Julio Cabrera 
-					of Miami, FL where they both met in Marist College of Poughkeepsie, NY. In the 
-					later months of the year 2013, the increasingly popular cryptocurrency, Bitcoin, 
+					of Miami, FL where they both met at Marist College of Poughkeepsie, NY. In the 
+					later months of the year 2013, the increasingly popular Bitcoin 
 					had demonstrated vast future potential and stability but there was just one 
 					problem: a way for the everyday person attaining their hands on it. That’s why 
 					PYC was created. With their eyes set on providing a unique service initially to 
@@ -48,12 +48,12 @@
 					<h6>Co-Founder, Bitcoin Enthusiast</h6>
 				</div>
 				<p>
-					Emilio is a bitcoin enthusiast with an unparalleled drive to learn more 
+					Emilio is a Bitcoin enthusiast with an unparalleled drive to learn more 
 					about potential applications with regards to the technology. He believes 
-					in bitcoin as a potential replacement to the archaic credit card processing 
+					Bitcoin is a potential replacement to the archaic credit card processing 
 					system that has too easily allowed for cybercriminals to cause headaches 
 					and billions in damages. Emilio enjoys researching security and is currently 
-					a Junior at Marist College.  In his free time you can find him traveling the 
+					a Senior at Marist College.  In his free time you can find him traveling the 
 					world and playing tennis.
 				</p>
 			</div>
@@ -69,8 +69,8 @@
 					everyday to make Bitcoin the standard payment for everyone. Upon 
 					graduation of Miami Senior High School (Miami, FL) as part of the class 
 					of 2010, Julio attended Marist College (Poughkeepsie, NY) where he was 
-					awarded the National Science Foundation 4-year scholarship and is currently 
-					majoring in Computer Science. He takes security extremely seriously and 
+					awarded the National Science Foundation 4-year scholarship and received a 
+					degree in Computer Science. He takes security extremely seriously and 
 					knows how he can help people migrate to Bitcoin safely. For fun, he likes 
 					to hack while eating chili cheese nachos and watching The Colbert Report.
 				</p>